Calling it a page more than an article as it is a gift guide :)
http://wizzley.com/gifts-under-1-the-ultimate-cheap-guide/
Any critique or compliment more than welcome (happy too see both).
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Can I get some feedback, please?
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Hello and welcome to Wizzley. I believe your page will look better by adding images to your text, and do something about all the white spaces. Maybe setting the text backgorund color to gray to add a bit of contrast. Hope this helps. Best wishes, Mike teddletonmr
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Hello :) Thanks for your advices - I added the text background (light pink as the bg is red), added some pictures that were at hand, some more tweaking will be needed. Great advice, really appreciate it! teddletonmr: 05. Apr 2012, 12:06
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Well done, you might want to consider moving some of your images inside your text capsules. Wizzley has a cool tool that makes it easy to do just that, where the images will draw the readers attention to contimue reading. Thanks for your advices - I added the text background (light pink as the bg is red), added some pictures that were at hand, some more tweaking will be needed. Great advice, really appreciate it! Hello and welcome to Wizzley. I believe your page will look better by adding images to your text, and do something about all the white spaces. teddletonmr
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