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AmandalineCasaduraleen
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on 06/05/2012

Hi guys, my name is Many, I'm kind of new here, and I'm basically testing the waters, as I've heard so many great things about this site. Anyway, I just wrote my first article - "Unique Wedding Centerpiece Ideas for a Remarkable Reception Table" you can find it in:

http://wizzley.com/unique-wedding-centerpiece-ideas-for-a-remarkable-reception-table/

I'm really excited to be here, and looking forward to be part of the community. Any comments will be deeply appreciated. Smile

 

 

Jerrico_Usher
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on 06/05/2012

Welcome Aboard The Good Ship Wizzley Amanda, I think you'll find the accomodations just lovely... I'll check out your article... (I'll hyperlink it for you below):

http://wizzley.com/unique-wedding-centerpiece-ideas-for-a-remarkable-reception-table/


-Jerrico


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Jerrico_Usher
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on 06/05/2012

I'm back Amanda, Overall the content is good, but a bit plain (the aesthetics not the words). You may want to add an image or two. You can get them at Pixabay.com 

(Free public domain images).

Note about pixabay: The bottom sliver are paid images but the top section is all public domain so only use the top images that come up (unless you want to pay for images)...

You should add about another 50-75 words to the top part where the adsense ads appear- it will make it look cleaner...

The content is good, it just needs some window dressing (pictures)...

if you like here is an introduction paragraph: (see your comments for that page- just don't approve it if you want to use it, if it's auto approved just delete my comment (to avoid dupe content issues as the forum is indexed on Google so I put it in a comment, just extract it and fix it to your liking and use it- or don't just trying to help :)

Good Luck! Great first article!

Jerrico


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AmandalineCasaduraleen
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on 06/06/2012

Hi Jerrico,

 

That's so nice of you. thank you so much. I deeply appreciate your help. :)

 

Mandy

Jerrico_Usher
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on 06/06/2012

Anytime :)


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