Can I have some feedback please, just created first page?

Hi, 

 

I've just created my first page on Wizzley and would really appreciate some feedback. Many thanks in advance.

http://wizzley.com/principles-of-moroccan-interior-design-how-to-transform-your-living-space-into-an-exotic-retreat/

Holly, you may be wondering why nobody has got back to you on this. I think you have been unlucky and posted to the forum just before a few others posted and your post has slipped down, and off, the visible part (3 posts show for the forum on a members page). Few people click on the 'New forum topics' button to see posts beyond those 3.

I suggest you post again and explain that Humagaia suggested you did so for the reasons given. You may have more success then.

I think it is a well constructed, informative, and well-written article. Just one observation: the arid area you refer to is a 'desert' not a 'dessert' as you have written ...oops.

 

Thanks humagaia,

 

I'll try re-posting, thanks for your comments and I'll correct that typo. I'm so glad you've spotted it, I didn't and I read through it three times! Note to self, wear specs more often.