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Guest
on 07/29/2012

Hi all

I have just published my first page here - I'd like some feedback please...the good and the bad. 

 

Too long?

Too short?

Placement?

 

Thanks all

 


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katiem2
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on 07/29/2012

Read it, a very interesting product review.  I myself have often found myself wanting this find it game to have around the house, but never see then while shopping. 

It's short and sweet, to the point.  

I would highlight the product in a Gallery large form to provide a bigger image of the product.  maybe adding both in this manner splitting them up adding each to accent the text modules.

 

Great start and welcome to Wizzley :)K


lobobrandon
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on 07/29/2012

I wouldn't be able to comment based on the game as I'm not really interested in it. But, I gave it a thumbs up Cool Well written and presented - looks great too :) Good start


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Guest
on 07/29/2012

Thankyou  - I was trying to work out how to align the text and image, now it worked. 

katiem2: 07/29/2012 - 09:43 PM

Read it, a very interesting product review.  I myself have often found myself wanting this find it game to have around the house, but never see then while shopping. 

It's short and sweet, to the point.  

I would highlight the product in a Gallery large form to provide a bigger image of the product.  maybe adding both in this manner splitting them up adding each to accent the text modules.

 

Great start and welcome to Wizzley :)K

 


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Guest
on 07/29/2012

Thanks as always Smile

lobobrandon: 07/29/2012 - 09:52 PM

I wouldn't be able to comment based on the game as I'm not really interested in it. But, I gave it a thumbs up Cool Well written and presented - looks great too :) Good start

 


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JeanBakula
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on 07/30/2012

Hello,

 I am not familiar with the game, but I thought your piece was well written and the game does sound interesting. I remember how hard it is to keep young people busy in summer! It's a good size for a wizzle too. I'm not sure about images, I'm sort of new here too and have a little trouble with them, so the advice from the others is best. Welcome to Wizzley!

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