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Lavendula and the Purple Shoes: A Halloween Story

 
graceonline
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on 10/31/2011

I believe this is my first ever attempt to publish fiction on a platform such as Wizzley. It's a little fable, a quick read, I hope, and I would appreciate any feedback. I'm not afraid of criticscim or of having  typos and gaffes pointed out, if I missed any, so fire away!

Lavendula and the Purple Shoes: A Different Kind of Halloween Story

lakeerieartists
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on 10/31/2011

I will take a look.


Paula Atwell (aka lakeerieartists) is the owner of an online art gallery, Lake Erie Artists Gallery and a freelance writer
graceonline
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on 10/31/2011

Thank you! I appreciate any time you may give to it. Always happy to return the favor.

terryw
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on 11/02/2011

Thank you, I Hv got your hollowen gift. Very good!

graceonline
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on 11/13/2011

Somehow I missed this previously, Terry. With apologies for tardiness, thank you for reading it and for commenting.

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