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My first effort for Wizzely

 
Sabeen
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on 10/24/2011

Hello Everyone,

My first article for Wizzely is online now. I need some feedback to know the status of my effort. As i write to help and share some useful information with students and professionals. Does my wizzely page fulfill this object. http://wizzley.com/online-counseling-degrees/ here it is.

what i beleive that feed back is always constructive and useful.

Regards

Anna Adam


thranax
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on 10/24/2011

Hello Anna! Even though im new here I have a lot of experience with articles in general. So with that being said:

Pros:

-Great format with pictures/text.
-A good amount of content about each counseling guide.
-Great introduction paragraph to transition into the article.

Cons:

-Lots of top text with no image/video/fun stuff. It asks the reader to really read. The problem with this is generally most people will not stay on the page for longer then 5-10 seconds and without something eye catching you get only the people who are diehard for the content.

Other then that one thing its a beautiful article, good job!

~thranax~


and this was all inspired by a little Marvin Gaye and Chardonnay...
bizilady
Posts: 122
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on 10/24/2011

I read and left a comment on your first wizz.Good work!


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Sabeen
Posts: 10
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on 10/25/2011

Thanx for analyzing my work. I will try to add more relevant pics. and will make my future work more eye catching.

Regards

Anna Adam


Sabeen
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on 10/25/2011

 

Thanx a lot to stop and read my article.

 

Regards

 

Anna Adam


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