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My first page

 
samsara
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on 04/05/2012

Calling it  a page more than an article as it is a gift guide :)

http://wizzley.com/gifts-under-1-the-ultimate-cheap-guide/

Any critique or compliment more than welcome (happy too see both).

teddletonmr
Posts: 143
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on 04/05/2012

Hello and welcome to Wizzley. I believe your page will look better by adding images to your text, and do something about all the white spaces.

Maybe setting the text backgorund color to gray to add a bit of contrast. Hope this helps.

Best wishes, Mike


Make it a great day, teddletonmr
samsara
Posts: 7
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on 04/05/2012

Hello :)

Thanks for your advices - I added the text background (light pink as the bg is red), added some pictures that were at hand, some more tweaking will be needed. Great advice, really appreciate it!

teddletonmr: 05. Apr 2012, 12:06

Hello and welcome to Wizzley. I believe your page will look better by adding images to your text, and do something about all the white spaces.

Maybe setting the text backgorund color to gray to add a bit of contrast. Hope this helps.

Best wishes, Mike

 

teddletonmr
Posts: 143
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on 04/05/2012

Well done,  you might want to  consider moving some of your  images inside your text capsules. Wizzley has a cool tool that makes it easy to do just that, where the images will draw the readers attention to contimue reading.  

Thanks for your advices - I added the text background (light pink as the bg is red), added some pictures that were at hand, some more tweaking will be needed. Great advice, really appreciate it!

Hello and welcome to Wizzley. I believe your page will look better by adding images to your text, and do something about all the white spaces.

Maybe setting the text backgorund color to gray to add a bit of contrast. Hope this helps.

 


Make it a great day, teddletonmr
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