I trust that many of you have been writing for quite some time. As such, I'd love to get some feedback on the "My First Day in India" article I've posted, which is essentially a travel journal with some humour sprinkled in.
Any feedback as to the content will be great. I'd also appreciate if any of you have good feedback as to layout, etc. I know the article is pretty text heavy as it is (my focus was on writing rather than website design), so if you've got good advice on how I can spice it up with pictures and videos - I'm all ears.
Thanks in advance to anyone who responds,