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››This Underground Garden is simply Amazing!

This Underground Garden is simply Amazing!

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Apr 23, 2013

It took me a little time to get around to reading this but I was blown away! WOW. Not what I expected at all.

 

http://wizzley.com/forestiere-underground-gardens-an-endangered-species/

 

Apr 23, 2013

I've read it and seen the beautiful creation of this genius. Great Article!

Apr 23, 2013

Thank you, Lana and Katie. It's just amazing how he did that with a pick and shovel. Of course, the summer weather in Fresno would make you want to dig a hole in the ground and crawl in.

Apr 23, 2013

I really enjoyed that one too.

Apr 23, 2013

Don't you think it deserves a badge, Chef. Hint! Hint!

Apr 23, 2013

I really would like to live there. It's amazing what people could do without modern tools.

Apr 23, 2013

I've read that one too- also agree it's great! Definitely badge worthy! :)

Apr 23, 2013

It's a fine article, but it contains several mistakes - wrong capitalization, missing letters, run-on sentences - and it does not even give the exact location of the gardens. It's a bit incomplete for an EC. Sorry, Brenda. Maybe you can improve it?

Apr 24, 2013

A run-on sentence. Oh my gosh. I've got to go find that.

Apr 24, 2013

Chef, where are those run-on sentences. I caught one word that shouldn't have been capitalized, and I changed one word to make it sound better.

Apr 24, 2013

Brenda - go ahead and get some proofreading help from a trusted friend. It's not all that bad. Just look it over re: grammar, sentence structure, proper capitalization (i.e. one "From" that should be a "from"), and missing letters (I think I remember a singular where there should be a plural).

When you're happy with your article, let me know and I'll review it again.

Apr 24, 2013

Okay, thanks. I've proofread that so many times. When it's our own writing, our eyes just slide right over those mistakes.

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