It took me a little time to get around to reading this but I was blown away! WOW. Not what I expected at all.
http://wizzley.com/forestiere-underground-gardens-an-endangered-species/
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Lana or LIl aka Ragtimelil RagtimeLil's Store on Weebly
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I've read it and seen the beautiful creation of this genius. Great Article! Katie McMurray
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Thank you, Lana and Katie. It's just amazing how he did that with a pick and shovel. Of course, the summer weather in Fresno would make you want to dig a hole in the ground and crawl in. Brenda Reeves
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I really enjoyed that one too. |
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Don't you think it deserves a badge, Chef. Hint! Hint! Brenda Reeves
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I really would like to live there. It's amazing what people could do without modern tools. |
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I've read that one too- also agree it's great! Definitely badge worthy! :) |
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It's a fine article, but it contains several mistakes - wrong capitalization, missing letters, run-on sentences - and it does not even give the exact location of the gardens. It's a bit incomplete for an EC. Sorry, Brenda. Maybe you can improve it? Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
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A run-on sentence. Oh my gosh. I've got to go find that. Brenda Reeves
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Chef, where are those run-on sentences. I caught one word that shouldn't have been capitalized, and I changed one word to make it sound better. Brenda Reeves
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Brenda - go ahead and get some proofreading help from a trusted friend. It's not all that bad. Just look it over re: grammar, sentence structure, proper capitalization (i.e. one "From" that should be a "from"), and missing letters (I think I remember a singular where there should be a plural). When you're happy with your article, let me know and I'll review it again. Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
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on 04/24/2013
Okay, thanks. I've proofread that so many times. When it's our own writing, our eyes just slide right over those mistakes. Brenda Reeves
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