Wow back atcha, that was the most amazing comment I've ever recieved! Would you believe this poem fell into obscurity the moment it launched on Hubpages? I've updated it a bit here and thanks to wizzleys box of crayons I could make it cooler to look at, but I'm so happy you liked it. I read this a lot myself (I have it printed out on a wall in the hallway). The other tool I use and you may enjoy is a peice of the show coach carter... I posted it in the forum under "our deepest fears"...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D-STD8-RS2k 2uestay (writer here) said "Thank you, I did not expect it to be what it was - it gave me goosebumps listening to it and brought tears to my eyes." so I hope it does the same for you. Good luck! (I have more of these to come....)