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Can I get some feedback, please?  

And I choose the most exciting of topics for my first ever wizzle!

 
Bhavesh
Posts: 90
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on 11/04/2011

I present to you my first ever wizzle,

It's up to you to not let it fizzle.

(Sorry, that was bad. My wizzle is better. I think.)

I will appreciate your input, feedback or anything else you can think of.

Here it is: High Performing Organization

Thank you in advance.


chefkeem
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on 11/04/2011

Hehe...your poem is truly baaaaad.

Your article is an interesting overview of your topic. It absolutely screams for more in-depth articles with detailed insights on its various aspects.


Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
Bhavesh
Posts: 90
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on 11/04/2011

Thank you Achim, for your insightful review, both of my poem and my wizzle. 

"Your article is an interesting overview of your topic. It absolutely screams for more in-depth articles with detailed insights on its various aspects."

And the more in-depth articles are coming!


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