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on 02/07/2012
Hi everyone I would really appreciate some feedback on my latest page: http://wizzley.com/travel-toiletries-pack-light-pack-green-1/ I'm unhappy with the look and feel (maybe it's all the amazon modules?) so am especially keen to hear tips and advice on this. All feedback welcome - do be brutal! Many thanks! |
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on 02/07/2012
Meagan: 07. Feb 2012, 16:54 A brutally-useful article, I'd say. Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
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on 02/07/2012
Looks great! The only thing I noticed is that your first text module does not have a title. Not sure if you left it out on purpose. Anyway, having a title there may help with keywords/traffic. |
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on 02/07/2012
Wow. I loved your wizz. Very interesting. I saw new products that really made me think, "I need that!" |
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on 02/08/2012
chefkeem - You are too kind Janet21 - Exactly the kind of feedback I need - I don't know much about keywords. Thank you! Jimmie - Thank you. This was my first real sales wizz so I'm a bit unsure about it all but your reaction is the one I'm going for! |
I love your wizzes and think I could learn a lot from you!