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Can I get some feedback, please?  

feedback on my latest page

 
Meagan
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on 02/07/2012

Hi everyone

I would really appreciate some feedback on my latest page:

http://wizzley.com/travel-toiletries-pack-light-pack-green-1/

I'm unhappy with the look and feel (maybe it's all the amazon modules?) so am especially keen to hear tips and advice on this.

All feedback welcome - do be brutal! 

Many thanks!

chefkeem
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on 02/07/2012

 

Meagan: 07. Feb 2012, 16:54

All feedback welcome - do be brutal! 

 

A brutally-useful article, I'd say.  Smile


Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
Janet21
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on 02/07/2012

Looks great! The only thing I noticed is that your first text module does not have a title. Not sure if you left it out on purpose. Anyway, having a title there may help with keywords/traffic.

Jimmie
Posts: 338
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on 02/07/2012

Wow. I loved your wizz. Very interesting. I saw new products that really made me think, "I need that!"

Meagan
Posts: 20
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on 02/08/2012

chefkeem - You are too kind Smile

Janet21 - Exactly the kind of feedback I need - I don't know much about keywords.  Thank you!

Jimmie - Thank you.  This was my first real sales wizz so I'm a bit unsure about it all but your reaction is the one I'm going for!  Laughing  I love your wizzes and think I could learn a lot from you!

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