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››First Time Writing - would love some feedback

First Time Writing - would love some feedback

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Can I get some feedback, please?
Mar 19, 2012

Hiya, I just joined the site yesterday, it's really my first time doing any writing of any kind, truth be told.

I've written two articles, both on the topic of Professional Wrestling and would appreciate any feedback on either of the articles, as I'm keen to pursue this further, as it's something I'm finding both enjoyable and relaxing.

http://wizzley.com/professional-wrestling-a-crumbling-industry/

This is my first article, would love to hear back. Thanks.

Mar 19, 2012

Hi James,

I think you've found your calling. More, please!   

 

Mar 19, 2012

I'm inordinately proud of you!  Ooh! A second article!  *goes to read*

(I'm on Skype, if you want to chat about it. Though wiser, more experienced writers will give you better feedback here.)

 

 

Mar 19, 2012

Very nice indeed, great to have you here you're a wonderful addition to our Wizzley group.  I look forward to watching you grown and prosper.  Smile

Mar 20, 2012

I enjoyed reading your first article. And it is about wrestling, topic I find very interesting. Great job! 

Welcome to Wizzley!

Mar 20, 2012

Thankyou very much for the wonderful feedback! 

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