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First Time Writing - would love some feedback

 
Jethraw
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on 03/19/2012

Hiya, I just joined the site yesterday, it's really my first time doing any writing of any kind, truth be told.

I've written two articles, both on the topic of Professional Wrestling and would appreciate any feedback on either of the articles, as I'm keen to pursue this further, as it's something I'm finding both enjoyable and relaxing.

http://wizzley.com/professional-wrestling-a-crumbling-industry/

This is my first article, would love to hear back. Thanks.

chefkeem
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Posts: 3394
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on 03/19/2012

Hi James,

I think you've found your calling. More, please!   

 


Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
JoHarrington
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on 03/19/2012

I'm inordinately proud of you!  Ooh! A second article!  *goes to read*

(I'm on Skype, if you want to chat about it. Though wiser, more experienced writers will give you better feedback here.)

 

 


katiem2
Posts: 1044
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on 03/19/2012

Very nice indeed, great to have you here you're a wonderful addition to our Wizzley group.  I look forward to watching you grown and prosper.  Smile


Mladen
Posts: 26
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on 03/20/2012

I enjoyed reading your first article. And it is about wrestling, topic I find very interesting. Great job! 

Welcome to Wizzley!


See more of my work: Rabies: the Oldest Disease and my Zazzle store: M&I Zazzle Store blog
Jethraw
Posts: 4
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on 03/20/2012

Thankyou very much for the wonderful feedback! 

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