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First Wizz Attempt?

 
Holistic_Health
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on 07/05/2011

I assume they're called Wizzes? Correct me if I'm wrong. 

I'd appreciate any feedback - layout, content, have at it. Adsense doesn't seem to be right -

http://wizzley.com/what-are-nettles/

Clara (Holistic_Health)


theherbivorehippie
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on 07/05/2011

I read it, loved it and found it extremely informative!Smile


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Holistic_Health
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on 07/05/2011

You're my new best friend 


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chefkeem
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on 07/05/2011

Clara - it's a fabulous piece of useful.   

I'd probably move the video up, between the first and the second text module. You have so much good content...you don't want to have people click away yet (link module), and you don't want to turn them off right away with your ads.

And by the time they have reached the end of your article, they might have forgotten about your Amazon offers on the top.

Reel 'em in first with your interesting stories, and then give 'em more info and shopping opportunities.

Your other "best friend".  

PS: AdSense takes a few days to adjust to your content.

PPS: Wizzes is okay. So is wizzles, wizzleys, articles, pages....


Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
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on 07/05/2011

I liked it as well. Never knew a herb could so so much.

Holistic_Health
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on 07/05/2011

Oh my, more beer buddies. Thank you, thank you 


spirituality
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on 07/06/2011

I prefer wizzles for the articles :) Great one btw. 


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Holistic_Health
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on 07/06/2011

Thanks for your support :)


Ramkitten
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on 07/20/2011

I agree -- well done! And of personal interest to me. My allergies have been pretty bad lately.


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