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My latest attempt at Marketing

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Ralpapajan
Posts: 16
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on 08/17/2011

Hi,

I have just published my second Post that is connected to both Amazon and Lulu.

It is called It's a Curve.

I would appreciate a Crit of this and any advice given would be welcomed.

I am areal newbie at Selling via the Internet.  So please treat me gently.

 

Yours aye,

Rob


I really do love this Wizzley Forum and the whole thing. I am learning something new here every time I visit.
chefkeem
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on 08/17/2011

Here are my gentle 5-cents-worth of advice:

Make your title and description more descriptive. (Do NOT change the URL, however!)

When people find your listing on the Google search results pages, they see nothing but a big fat "Life's a curve...", and in the description underneath: "...a learning curve".

How do they know what your page is about?

Why would they click on such meager information?

Title and description are our most important tools to get click-throughs to our articles. Make them informative, persuasive, attractive. attention-grabbing...whatever it takes.

Good luck with your books, Rob. They look very interesting.  Smile


Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
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Ralpapajan
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on 08/17/2011

Cheers my friend.

 

Much appreciated.

 

Rob


I really do love this Wizzley Forum and the whole thing. I am learning something new here every time I visit.
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