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Ragtimelil
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on 08/01/2012

I just finished a product "review" page and tried to use the tips on the other thread. I don't know what I'm doing so I hope I'm close. I certainly better get faster at it. It took all afternoon just to find the right products. Wadaya think?

http://wizzley.com/gifts-for-campers-under-20/

 


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Sam
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on 08/01/2012

Quick review as it is past my bed time:

Your intro paragraph is too short - resulting only in a small add being displayed.

I would put the products and their reviews side by side, but might be just me.

Apart of that, great article, Sy


Ragtimelil
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on 08/01/2012

Thanks! I'll see what I can do. I do have trouble coming up with things to say sometimes....

 

Sleep tight!


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chefkeem
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on 08/01/2012

I'd make the product images bigger, where possible.  Smile


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Ragtimelil
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on 08/01/2012

OK they're big. That is ONE big yellow hat!

Cool


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chefkeem
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on 08/01/2012

NOW you're tawkin'! At least you can SEE the products, details and all...  Smile


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Jerrico_Usher
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on 08/01/2012

I'll take a look at your http://wizzley.com/gifts-for-campers-under-20/ page... :)

Right away I like it, it's nicely built. It needs a conclusion paragraph to end it in text not product ads though. I try to throw in a paragraph or two to summarize the review and create a call to action (hurry and start your shopping early before you run out of money in december!)...

Looks good! (yea make that top paragrpah 100+ words to bank on the full adsense block :)

Jerrico

Ragtimelil: 08/01/2012 - 06:03 PM

I just finished a product "review" page and tried to use the tips on the other thread. I don't know what I'm doing so I hope I'm close. I certainly better get faster at it. It took all afternoon just to find the right products. Wadaya think?

http://wizzley.com/gifts-for-campers-under-20/

 

 


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Ragtimelil
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on 08/01/2012

Thanks for the input. I do 'preciate it.  I'm going to bed now. I'll see what I can do with it tomorrow.Müde, Still,...


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Ragtimelil
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on 08/02/2012

I just wanted to say that these discussions on product pages have been GREAT! I can do one even when I'm not inspired. I'm even getting a little faster in creating them. I know I'm still new at it and have a lot to learn, but thanks to all you pros out there, I've made a start!!!!!

THANKS!!!!!


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JoHarrington
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on 08/03/2012

Let me second this.  I've learned so much!  Thank you all. <3


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