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on 08/01/2012
I just finished a product "review" page and tried to use the tips on the other thread. I don't know what I'm doing so I hope I'm close. I certainly better get faster at it. It took all afternoon just to find the right products. Wadaya think? http://wizzley.com/gifts-for-campers-under-20/
Lana or LIl aka Ragtimelil RagtimeLil's Store on Weebly
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on 08/01/2012
Quick review as it is past my bed time: Your intro paragraph is too short - resulting only in a small add being displayed. I would put the products and their reviews side by side, but might be just me. Apart of that, great article, Sy |
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on 08/01/2012
Thanks! I'll see what I can do. I do have trouble coming up with things to say sometimes....
Sleep tight! Lana or LIl aka Ragtimelil RagtimeLil's Store on Weebly
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on 08/01/2012
I'd make the product images bigger, where possible. Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
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on 08/01/2012
OK they're big. That is ONE big yellow hat!
Lana or LIl aka Ragtimelil RagtimeLil's Store on Weebly
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on 08/01/2012
NOW you're tawkin'! At least you can SEE the products, details and all... Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
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on 08/01/2012
I'll take a look at your http://wizzley.com/gifts-for-campers-under-20/ page... :) Right away I like it, it's nicely built. It needs a conclusion paragraph to end it in text not product ads though. I try to throw in a paragraph or two to summarize the review and create a call to action (hurry and start your shopping early before you run out of money in december!)... Looks good! (yea make that top paragrpah 100+ words to bank on the full adsense block :) Jerrico Ragtimelil: 08/01/2012 - 06:03 PM
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on 08/01/2012
Thanks for the input. I do 'preciate it. I'm going to bed now. I'll see what I can do with it tomorrow. Lana or LIl aka Ragtimelil RagtimeLil's Store on Weebly
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on 08/02/2012
I just wanted to say that these discussions on product pages have been GREAT! I can do one even when I'm not inspired. I'm even getting a little faster in creating them. I know I'm still new at it and have a lot to learn, but thanks to all you pros out there, I've made a start!!!!! THANKS!!!!! Lana or LIl aka Ragtimelil RagtimeLil's Store on Weebly
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on 08/03/2012
Let me second this. I've learned so much! Thank you all. <3 My stuff: A Writer's Guide to Wizzley | Beautiful Britain!
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