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Can I get some feedback, please?  

Question about sales-oriented page

 
kajohu
Posts: 200
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on 11/04/2011

On http://wizzley.com/checkpoint-friendly-laptop-bags/, do you think there is too much info at the beginning of the page?   Should I get to the products more quickly and spread out the info throughout the rest of the page?

I want people to look at it who want to buy the bags of course, but I also want to include the info I have.  Will I lose their attention, do you think, before they get to the product suggestions?

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(Also if you have any other suggestions to make the page more effective, I'm happy to hear them!!)


Karen
chefkeem
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on 11/04/2011

The info is very important, and it's great that you've added a link to the TSA site. I like your page the way it is, Karen.


Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
kajohu
Posts: 200
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on 11/04/2011

Thanks Smile


Karen
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