Yup. I am trying out a new idea I had. Write an article that MIGHT be of interest and put in something detailed about a product.
Does it workl? Please advise me. Ciao
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Can I get some feedback, please?
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Interesting article, Ralpapajan! I like the personal tone. Now, I'd like to know more about those glasses! I think you've done a nice lead in to presenting them, but maybe a little background about the theory behind the glasses and how they improve vision would be beneficial. Otherwise, I really like your style and your storytelling approach. |
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Generally, I like your article idee and your style. However, I think you should come to the point much sooner. Right now, visitors have to scroll down before they see anything about the actual subject of your page. They might click away before getting to your offers. Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
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TYVM. I worried about it being a bit long winded. That is why I asked. I appreciate your advice.
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