A Critique Please

I called to get permission to use the photos on this article. It was granted and requested that I send them a copy so they could post it for their visitors. I want to make sure I don't have any overlooked mistakes. Do you think the introduction is okay? My brain isn't working too well right now. I'm hesitant to add any advertisement since they want a copy of it.

I'm guessing you meant this article? If so, I've read it and it seems fine to me, but I'm currently very tired and worn down, so although I'm sure it is totally good, I wouldn't trust me!

Only thing I potentially would change is:

"Forestiere Underground Gardens remain in the Forestiere family over 100 years after the creator began constructing it."

to

"Forestiere Underground Gardens has remained in the Forestiere family over 100 years after the creator began constructing it."

but that's just personal preference I suppose.

Also, I'm not sure if it's your Chitika account, but you should consider disabling the link ads as it makes the page somewhat unsightly and disrupts the page layout itself - it looks far more professional with the ads placed neatly at the top. :)

For example:

Yes, definitely disable the text link ads from within your Chitika account, please.

I was reminding myself. Don't forget the links. lol! Thanks nightowl. I hadn't thought of that.

Okay, how do I disable Chitika?

Thanks for catching that mistake Paul.

Chitika has this option somewhat hidden away under the Domains & Apps menu item. Once you click on it, you'll see a page with "Default App Settings" and 3 options underneath. Uncheck the boxes next to these options and save. Your changes should be instantly active.

I did that, but they're still there. I'll check to make sure I saved.

Yep, They're still there.

Nope, they're gone Brenda. Cache, maybe? ;)

They're showing up for me.

Thank you Catana. Something was bothering me about that and I couldn't put my finger on it.