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This Underground Garden is simply Amazing!

 
Ragtimelil
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on 04/23/2013

It took me a little time to get around to reading this but I was blown away! WOW. Not what I expected at all.

 

http://wizzley.com/forestiere-underground-gardens-an-endangered-species/

 


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katiem2
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on 04/23/2013

I've read it and seen the beautiful creation of this genius. Great Article!


BrendaReeves
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on 04/23/2013

Thank you, Lana and Katie. It's just amazing how he did that with a pick and shovel. Of course, the summer weather in Fresno would make you want to dig a hole in the ground and crawl in.


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dustytoes
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on 04/23/2013

I really enjoyed that one too.


BrendaReeves
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on 04/23/2013

Don't you think it deserves a badge, Chef. Hint! Hint!


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AbbyFitz
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on 04/23/2013

I really would like to live there. It's amazing what people could do without modern tools.


HollieT
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on 04/23/2013

I've read that one too- also agree it's great! Definitely badge worthy! :)

chefkeem
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on 04/23/2013

It's a fine article, but it contains several mistakes - wrong capitalization, missing letters, run-on sentences - and it does not even give the exact location of the gardens. It's a bit incomplete for an EC. Sorry, Brenda. Maybe you can improve it?


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BrendaReeves
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on 04/23/2013

A run-on sentence. Oh my gosh. I've got to go find that.


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BrendaReeves
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on 04/23/2013

Chef, where are those run-on sentences. I caught one word that shouldn't have been capitalized, and I changed one word to make it sound better.


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chefkeem
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on 04/23/2013

Brenda - go ahead and get some proofreading help from a trusted friend. It's not all that bad. Just look it over re: grammar, sentence structure, proper capitalization (i.e. one "From" that should be a "from"), and missing letters (I think I remember a singular where there should be a plural).

When you're happy with your article, let me know and I'll review it again.


Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
BrendaReeves
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on 04/24/2013

Okay, thanks. I've proofread that so many times. When it's our own writing, our eyes just slide right over those mistakes.


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