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Mike_W
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on 09/25/2012

Hi guys,

Could I please have some feedback on this new page: http://wizzley.com/hemlock-grove-tv-show/

Any feedback is appreciated, but particularly with SEO (Hemlock Grove TV Show). I'm having no impact on the SERPS at the moment with anything I've written.

Thank you!

 

WNJohns
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on 10/27/2012

Heya Mike,

I took a look at your article, it looked pretty good! Interconnected with other articles, and a pretty interesting looking picture.

The only thing that really caught my attention (that might help with visitors) was that the text was in large chunks. Any chance there's anything AllPosters related you could use to redistribute the test around another picture? Or do you have any other links or picture that could be used throughout the bodies of the text?

Other than that, it looked really good, nice article.

-WNJohns

Mike_W
Posts: 38
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on 10/28/2012

Hi WNJohns, Thanks for your feedback!

I'll have a look into breaking up the text a bit.

Cheers,

Mike

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