My first article - feeling a little nervous

I'd very much appreciate some critique:

How to Keep Up With Music Trends

Thank you so much in advance!

Hi LR!

I enjoyed your article.You've got some good tips.

You might want to include an Amazon module featuring music by some of the bands you've discovered that way. Or maybe some books on popular music or posters from an AllPosters module. That way if someone purchases something, you'll get a little income from your article.

(I'm assuming you're an affiliate. If you're not, it's easy to sign up for either of those sites.)

Welcome to Wizzley! Please write more! I look forward to reading more of your articles.

Sheilamarie,

thank you so much! I will be sure to follow your suggestions!

Thanks for this useful article, LR. I wrote you a message about your Amazon text links. Other than that - I really appreciate your page.  

Did you change the URL? I can't locate your page.

Oh no, I had to revise it, because I had included some amazon links with my own affiliate code. I have republished it again, but will probably rethink the layout a bit .

Thanks so much for such quick replies!

It's live now. Thanks for the adjustment, LR!  

Thanks once again for helpful feedback and comments.

I have one question - the amazon MP3 modules are flash based, right?

They do not appear when I look at the page on my iPad. I think I will just change them to amazon links of the MP3s on amazon then...