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My first article - feeling a little nervous

 
LR
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on 11/05/2011

I'd very much appreciate some critique:

How to Keep Up With Music Trends

Thank you so much in advance!

sheilamarie
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on 11/05/2011

Hi LR!

I enjoyed your article.You've got some good tips.

You might want to include an Amazon module featuring music by some of the bands you've discovered that way. Or maybe some books on popular music or posters from an AllPosters module. That way if someone purchases something, you'll get a little income from your article.

(I'm assuming you're an affiliate. If you're not, it's easy to sign up for either of those sites.)

Welcome to Wizzley! Please write more! I look forward to reading more of your articles.


Read one of my books Sheila's Books
LR
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on 11/05/2011

Sheilamarie,

thank you so much! I will be sure to follow your suggestions!

chefkeem
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on 11/05/2011

Thanks for this useful article, LR. I wrote you a message about your Amazon text links. Other than that - I really appreciate your page.  Smile


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graceonline
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on 11/05/2011

The link leads nowhere today. I checked your profile page, and it says you have no articles. I'd love to read it when you post again.

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Jimmie
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on 11/05/2011

Did you change the URL? I can't locate your page.

LR
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on 11/05/2011

Oh no, I had to revise it, because I had included some amazon links with my own affiliate code. I have republished it again, but will probably rethink the layout a bit .

Thanks so much for such quick replies!

graceonline
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on 11/05/2011

Please do re-post the URL when it's visible again.

chefkeem
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on 11/05/2011

It's live now. Thanks for the adjustment, LR!  Smile


Achim "Chef Keem" Thiemermann is the co-founder of a pretty cool new platform called...um...er...oh, yeah - Wizzley.com.
graceonline
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on 11/05/2011

Nicely done! I don't see a thing I'd change. Useful information, laid out logically and attractively, and you kept my attention.

LR
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on 11/07/2011

Thanks once again for helpful feedback and comments.

I have one question - the amazon MP3 modules are flash based, right?

They do not appear when I look at the page on my iPad. I think I will just change them to amazon links of the MP3s on amazon then...

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