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New Around Here - First Article

 
NateR
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on 05/14/2012

Hey folks! Recently published my first article and just made some minor tweaks to it to bring it up to snuff. I was wondering if you had any suggestions for it? It'd be greatly appreciated! Laughing

 

http://wizzley.com/asteroidmining/

 

Also, for some reason, it won't let me link it here or it says the page is gone when I link it somewhere else. If anyone knows how to fix that, it would also be awesome.

dustytoes
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on 05/14/2012

Asteroid Mining

It is well written and interesting, but I would break up all that text into shorter, easier to read paragraphs and add more pictures.

I am trying to add the link for you and will see if it works - yup it does!

Good luck,

Pam


katiem2
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on 05/14/2012

Great article, I very much enjoyed the content and subject matter.  Do look forward to reading more of your work.  You've got the most important part down, the quality content, the rest will come as you find your way around the many tools and options here at Wizzley.  Welcome, great to have you here at Wizzley.


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