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My Second Wizzley Page Your Thoughts

 
mikescoolstuff
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on 08/24/2012

I finally got around to writing my 2nd Wizzley page. It's on the LEGO Monster Fighters Zombies set. The page does feature the other sets, but the zombies are the main focus. What are your thoughts on the page? Is there enough info, enough content? Your thoughts.

 

 

Ragtimelil
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on 08/24/2012

I'm not an expert in this product stuff, but I thought it was explained well. The only thing is I thought I'd see pictures by the descriptions down at the bottom, ya know? But that's just me. I might be overdoing the picture thing anyway.

But it looked good to me!Smile


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mikescoolstuff
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on 08/24/2012

Hi Ragtimelil, I used one text module for the content of the other sets and as far as I know you can only use one picture. Since there was more then one subject I decided not to use any pictures. Thanks for your comment.

Sheri_Oz
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on 08/25/2012

It is a very well set up article, in my opinion. I don't know about not having pictures for the products toward the end. See how it goes. If you get clicks on the products with pics and not the ones without, or if you get clicks even on those without pics, then you will know.


mikescoolstuff
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on 08/25/2012

 

Sheri: 08/25/2012 - 12:39 AM

It is a very well set up article, in my opinion. I don't know about not having pictures for the products toward the end. See how it goes. If you get clicks on the products with pics and not the ones without, or if you get clicks even on those without pics, then you will know.

I agree, I could then decide rather or not to use individual text modules for each.

jan111
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on 09/04/2012

I found your style of writing easy to read and that kept me reading even though it's not an area of interest. Well done!


mikescoolstuff
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on 09/04/2012

 

jan111: 09/04/2012 - 11:42 AM

I found your style of writing easy to read and that kept me reading even though it's not an area of interest. Well done!

Thanks, that's good to hear.

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