An example would be this line from Wilfred Owen’s ‘Anthem for Doomed Youth’:
“Not in the hands of boys, but in their eyes.”
Now, when read aloud, it would sound something like this:
NOT in / the HANDS / of BOYS / but in / their EYES
The keen-eyed will notice that the first foot is a trochaic substitution, meaning that the ‘de dum’ rhythm has been replaced by a ‘dum de’, to emphasise the ‘NOT’. But the pyrrhic substitute can be found in the fourth foot.
Now, these syllables both need to be unstressed, because ‘but IN their EYES’ would not sound quite right and, more importantly, the emphasis of the word is completely unnecessary.
Similarly, if Owen had plumped for a trochee and had “BOYS BUT in their…” the result is actually quite ugly. So, because it is neither desirable nor necessary to have these syllables stressed, they are the unstressed beats of the pyrrhic meter.
Comments
Thanks for this. I write poetry but am woefully ignorant of the theory behind it all. I am dismayed at how little we were taught at school. Now I am trying to catch up.
Alice has nothing on the amount of impossible things that I can believe I can do before breakfast. Mind you, prolonging the moment before I actually have breakfast helps...
Thanks, Jo. I agree, 'Anthem for Doomed Youth' is a beautiful piece of work. All of Owen's are great, but Anthem really stands out.
Ooh, good for you! I can imagine when you hear the words, "it can't be done", you get in your 'game on' mode. Good luck with it.
'Anthem for Doomed Youth' is one of the most perfect poems I've ever read. Thanks for this article, it's always good to be reminded of things I'd half-forgotten.
I'm currently trying to write poetry in English according to Welsh bardic metres, because it apparently can't be done. I'm beginning to see why.... but challenge on!