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First off, keep writing and publishing. Never let any comment get you to stop or doubt.
Maybe I am wrong, maybe it will make your work even better

How to organize an article...
First off, what is it you want to write or do with the article? inform, persuade, different reason? But please do not try to focus on both in one article. Only inform, or inform only to persuade.
Organization of an essay to persuade
Start is always preamble, what is the subject , and the thesis you want to attack/defend.
Arguments from both sides, often new paragraph every new argument.
In the end a conclusion with a small summary of previous paragraphs that concludes that an justified opinion on the thesis.
rs-jagex-microtransactions I think is a well-organized article.

What is your audience? Some people say (awesome argument, always works for Fox News) that if writing for a college audience, write it for high-school
If writing for high-school audience, write it for 10-year old. It does make some sense to me. Keep it simple.

If you do want to share more in- depth information, I would use a link to the source. More links, more sources, more credible, and if people want to go in depth, they can. And for the random stupid consumer, they can still get the point without reading all the information.

Do you know Cracked? (the site). I love most of those articles (the rest is not good, only the articles). I would totally read the most 5 gruesome lethal-injections that went horrible wrong? Some morbid jokes and informative mostly, and most of this information speaks for itself.

Keep writing, and I want to dare you to write an article for Cracked. No clue about pay-out and stuff, but I think bigger audience.

Thank you for the Thank you.

Great Article!

I really enjoyed reading this! You explained the issues very well.

I've seen it on both sides of the divide. There has been some movement in Welsh over the centuries, but fundamentally modern Welsh speakers can make sense of quite ancient text.

On the other side of the border, even century old English can cause some problems for those used to its modern variant. Old English is practically a foreign language.

I can see the pros and cons in both. I love the fact that I don't have to learn another language to enjoy old Welsh poems. I love the fact that I have the versatility to add new words to my vocabulary too.

On balance, I'd say that I'm a Descriptivist.

Mine are too short and stumpy to ever lok good At least now I am too old to care lol. Like the layout of this wizz Katie and the avice is good too

It makes sense that the caffeine and other components of coffee both stimulate blood flow with topical use. I'be.noted coffee being added to many beauty products for this very reason. Taking advantage of the fresh coffee we brew each day makes for a fresh treatment as we apply it to our legs while the coffee is still oxgenated not broken down. Drinking coffee has proven to be healthy raising our metabolism and now this topical application increases the benefit two fold. Thanks Katie great information to avoid fat flabby legs... Something none of us want.

Thank YOU, Ahmed. I am glad this article was helpful to you!

Thank you, Katie! It is true Zazzle is fun adventure. I hope your digital designes will find lots of customers, there.

Hello Wendy, thanks for the comment. I think you're right about the confidence thing and that, again, comes down to this fixation that women have to 'look' a certain way to be attractive or even accepted. Men don't tend to have that worry. I saw the ep of QI you're referring to and I remember, at the time, finding it odd. If anything, I laugh more at female comedians, because they, usually, talk about things I can relate to. However, I believe Wanda Sykes had a theory that women can be intimidated by a woman on stage, because she’s commanding the attention of the room, including all the male attention. - I guess it makes some of us feel insecure. Anyway, as you say, he’s hoping things improve! Thanks again.

My favourite role of his was "Dirty" Harry Calahan

Thanks for the tips

Thank you, Von von Vonn. It's a real pleasure to have you here, not only reading but feeding back like this.

I'm so passionate about this subject that I want all of the truths to be self-evident. I want to touch all bases and have the arguments laid out, one after the other, everything that could possibly be leveled against it. I see murders happening in some vicious circle, because that one was deemed wrong, but this one was deemed right and moral. And I want to scream.

Instead, I research my facts, present my evidence and hope that enough people start paying attention that, along the way, lives get saved. Ok, I know that I can't do that on my own, but I can contribute my chapter.

What you're doing is telling me the best way to go about that. I thought it was to lay it all out. You're saying that bite-sized pieces is best.

Thank you.

My knowledge are often random snippets of random stuff, but most are backed by a quick search on the phrases I use.
For 'western world' and death penalty, only usa exist. For the rest only China. The rest of the world is not there, (for the media etc.)

I see in your article that you are have alot of knowledge/resource into it, but I think its not one coherent story, sometimes to much detail.
Start was good, sometimes bit too subjective with comparisons.

Some absurd detail about some company that produced drug, some talk about other countries, and a lot of death people cases. For a layman it is in some parts too much detail. And it is uncertain to me, what the point really is, you want to make. Or to many different points.

In an article, try to just touch the bases, with small anecdotes, two or three cases and move on. And for more details, maybe a different article.
What you have written is good, but you can split it in like 5 different articles.

Most information is USA-based I think, so maybe.
execution in other countries,
waiting for death (the system, legal, waiting),
death penalty legal injection (just about whats in it, the procedure, 2-3 cases.)
The extreme case of person x.
Morality
Innocent after death penalty. (ooh, thats 6 already)

In my opinion you tried to touch and tell all and as much in one article. I did read most of the article, but at some parts my head just hurt.

That is it. You know too much! What is better a soccer-player or a professor at a University? Economic value of course.
About tying up, just my effort for some morbid joke. I stuff like that, like black mirror by Charlie Brooker.

And do not tell me I just tried to write an article about your article. Remember I told you that I am lazy. Ooh, and you just got yourself a new fan, and probably will comment more random phrases in the future.

Wow! I didn't know that about veterinarians! Is that the same for all of the countries that have lethal injection?

By law, in the US at least, the witnesses are supposed to watch the execution. It's something about ensuring that it all took place. But I can think of at least two where the curtains were closed, then re-opened once the victim was dead.

I don't think you can put a time limit on good articles. It's not the actual writing which is the issue, it's the research. If you were knowledgeable about the subject, then an amazing article could be knocked out in minutes (albeit a rather short one!). This one took me 16 hours to research and write, but I'm an AI activist, so I already had a wide understanding of the issues behind that too.

I'm sorry that you thought it was rushed and unfocused. I was trying to create a broad overview for those new to the subject. It could also be a reference for future articles, where I do get more specific about individual cases.

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I'd love to read it, but unfortunately I have no Dutch. :( I'll trust your translation on it though. My only other personal resource would be Google translate. I know from its efforts with Welsh that that is dodgy!

As for SoF, we're all hoping on that one.